Which foods are unhealthy? What is unhealthy about them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the hamburger is unhealthy food. The hamburger isn\'t good at our healthy. And they don\'t have nutrient too!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ridoria! That\'s the sad truth. I love hamburgers, too but you could gain more risks than benefits if you eat them often.
-T. Sonny
I think the hamburger is unhealthy food.
>>I think, hamburger is unhealthy food.
The hamburger isn\'t good at our healthy.
>>Hamburger isn\'t good for our health.
And they don\'t have nutrient too!
>>And they don\'t have nutrients, too!
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