Which gender is better at giving advice?

2024-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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In my opinion, it depends on the subject. As for issues or subject which are required technical or professional knowledge, I think mem are good at giving advice. Because most men act like a problem-solver when giving advice. But for oter issues such as relationships, lifestyle, and feelings,women are better at giving advice. Women are usually concerned about that kinds of issues and they are more careful when giving advice.

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Hi there, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree with you. It\'s a case-by-case basis, and sometimes it also depends on whether the person we are asking for advice has experienced the same thing or not. I think if they had the same experience, their advice might be more effective, and they can understand our situation better.
- T. Caitlyn
In my opinion, it depends on the subject. 
>> CORRECT
As for issues or subject which are required technical or professional knowledge, I think mem are good at giving advice.
>> As for issues or subjects that require technical or professional knowledge, I think men are good at giving advice. 
Because most men act like a problem-solver when giving advice. 
>> CORRECT
But for oter issues such as relationships, lifestyle, and feelings,women are better at giving advice. 
>> But for other issues such as relationships, lifestyle, and feelings, women are better at giving advice.
Women are usually concerned about that kinds of issues and they are more careful when giving advice.
>> Women are usually concerned about these kinds of issues and they are more careful when giving advice.

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