Which German places would you like to visit? Why?
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I want to visit Fussen. There is a very famous castle called ‘Neuschwanstein’. The castle is a model to Disney castle. I’m a big fan of Disney movies, so I want to see the real castle in the Disney movie.
Before I visited Germany, I wasn’t able to go there because Fussen was very far from our cottage. So I thought if I go to Germany again, I’ll visit and enjoy the castle’s view no matter what. Finally after COVID-19, I’m supposed to go on a business trip to Germany in the first week of next month. I’m looking forward to go to Fussen !
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleI want to visit Fussen.
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There is a very famous castle called ‘Neuschwanstein’.
>> CORRECT!
The castle is a model to Disney castle.
>> The castle\'s model is similar with the Disney castle.
I’m a big fan of Disney movies, so I want to see the real castle in the Disney movie.
>> CORRECT!
Before I visited Germany, I wasn’t able to go there because Fussen was very far from our cottage.
Before I visited Germany, I wasn’t able to go there because Fussen was very far from our cottage.
>> CORRECT!
So I thought if I go to Germany again, I’ll visit and enjoy the castle’s view no matter what.
>> CORRECT!
Finally after COVID-19, I’m supposed to go on a business trip to Germany in the first week of next month.
>> CORRECT!
I’m looking forward to go to Fussen !
>> CORRECT!
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