Which good habit do you think would be the most difficult to develop? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think studying is the most difficult habit to develop.
Because if we are going to study hard, then it is good to having a purpose.
But the students are still young, so they might not know how to choose the purpose.
And also in case of adults, they already have a lot of things to do.
Because of these reasons, I think studying is the most difficult habit to develop.
강사 첨삭
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Thanks for the effort this week! Please enjoy the holiday with your family! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT
Because if we are going to study hard, then it is good to having a purpose.
Because if we are going to study hard, then it is good to having a purpose.
>>Because if we are going to study hard, then it is good to have a purpose.
But the students are still young, so they might not know how to choose the purpose.
>>CORRECT
And also in case of adults, they already have a lot of things to do.
And also in case of adults, they already have a lot of things to do.
>>CORRECT
Because of these reasons, I think studying is the most difficult habit to develop.
Because of these reasons, I think studying is the most difficult habit to develop.
>>CORRECT
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