Which good habit do you think would be the most difficult to develop

2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

학생이 쓴 원문

i think it is difficult to work out everyday. i usually decide everynight \'i will go to workout next morning!\' but in the morning, \' oh i can\'t leave my bed. and outside is so freezing today if i go to exercise i will have a cold.\' so i don\'t go to workout everyday. i hope the weather gets warmer....

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! You did well on your homework but please be mindful of your capitalization. ^^ Remember that the first letter of the first word in your sentences should always be capitalized. Also, \'I\' should always be capitalized as well. ~T. Elisha ^^

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 i think it is difficult to work out everyday.

>> correct!~

or:

>> I think it is difficult to work out everyday.
 i usually decide everynight \'i will go to workout next morning!\'

>> I usually tell myself every night that I will work out the next morning.
 but in the morning, \' oh i can\'t leave my bed. and outside is so freezing today if i go to exercise i will have a cold.\'

>> But in the morning, I can\'t leave my bed because it\'s freezing outside and I might get sick if I go out.
 so i don\'t go to workout everyday.

>> That is why I don\'t workout everyday.
 i hope the weather gets warmer....

>> I hope the weather gets warmer soon.

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