Which greeting kind of annoys you?
학생이 쓴 원문
It really annoys me when people say that when are you having a baby?
I have prepared to be a mother right after marrige such as taking folic acid and qutting beer because I really want to be pregnent as soon as possible.
I feel fine for asking it just for my future plan with worries.
But when someone who isn\'t close to me and doesn\'t know my situations starts to nag about pregency, it makes me very annoied.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, Yu [이름]!
Catch you in class!
Cheers,
Jean~~
It really annoys me when people say that when are you having a baby?
>> It really annoys me when people ask when I\'m having a baby.
I have prepared to be a mother right after marrige such as taking folic acid and qutting beer because I really want to be pregnent as soon as possible.
>> I have been preparing to be a mother since the early days of my marriage by taking folic acid and quitting beer because I really want to be pregnant as soon as possible.
I feel fine for asking it just for my future plan with worries.
>> It\'s fine when people asked me, but I can\'t help worrying as I\'m still not pregnant.
But when someone who isn\'t close to me and doesn\'t know my situations starts to nag about pregency, it makes me very annoied.
>> However, when someone who isn\'t close to me and doesn\'t know my situation starts to nag about pregnancy, it makes me very annoyed.
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