Which greeting kind of annoys you?

2021-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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When I meet people, they usually greet me by saying hello. But sometimes, there are someone who tell me some works considering my appearance like “you become prettier” or “have you lost weight?”. I guess they think that the words make the listener think ‘oh, they are caring about me’. To me, however, it sounds like they evaluate my appearance, so these kinds of greeting word make me annoying.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thank you for diligently doing your homework. Stay happy and positive in life.

~Teacher Aki ^^

Which greeting kind of annoys you?

>> Which kind of greetings annoy you?

When I meet people, they usually greet me by saying hello.

>> Everytime I meet people, they usually greet me with a \"hello\".

But sometimes, there are someone who tell me some works considering my appearance like “you become prettier” or “have you lost weight?”.

>> But sometimes, there are some people who consider my appearance like \"I\'ve became prettier\" or If I had lose some weight\".

I guess they think that the words make the listener think ‘oh, they are caring about me’.

>> I think they thought that these words made me think that they care for me.

To me, however, it sounds like they evaluate my appearance,

>> However, for me, it sounds like they were evaluating my appearance.

so these kinds of greeting word make me annoying.

>> So, these kinds of greeting annoys me.


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