Which greeting kind of annoys you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m not sure that I understand this subject correctly. Does \'Which greeting kind of annoys you?\' mean \'Some greetings I hate\'?
With starting this task, I thought about various type of greeting. Shaking hands, wave, a hug or a bow...
I usually wave my hands, saying hello my friends. And take a bow when I\'m with a person who is older than me.
These greetings are such a habit. They\'re so automatic.
But hug or kiss are not familiar to me. I tend to avoid touching with people. Especially, in case I barely know them.
If someone I don\'t wanna touch (Actually I really don\'t want it, even though they\'re my old friends) try to hug me as an expression of welcome, it\'ll be uncomfortable and pretty annoying...
강사 첨삭
Hi, Victoria!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree, some people are really not comfortable when it comes to physical contact as a form of greeting. You did great in answering this question. Just take note of the different corrections below.
-T. Caitlyn
I\'m not sure that I understand this subject correctly.>>CORRECT.
Does \'Which greeting kind of annoys you?\' mean \'Some greetings I hate\'?
>>CORRECT.
With starting this task, I thought about various type of greeting. Shaking hands, wave, a hug or a bow...
With starting this task, I thought about various type of greeting. Shaking hands, wave, a hug or a bow...
>> Regarding this question, I thought about various types of greeting such as shaking hands, waving, a hug, or a bow.
I usually wave my hands, saying hello my friends. And take a bow when I\'m with a person who is older than me.
I usually wave my hands, saying hello my friends. And take a bow when I\'m with a person who is older than me.
>>I usually wave my hands to say hello to my friends and bow when greeting a person who is older than me.
These greetings are such a habit. They\'re so automatic.
These greetings are such a habit. They\'re so automatic.
>>These greetings have become a habit and are done automatically.
But hug or kiss are not familiar to me.
But hug or kiss are not familiar to me.
>>But hugs are kisses are not familiar to me.
I tend to avoid touching with people. Especially, in case I barely know them.
>>I tend to avoid touching people especially when I barely know them.
If someone I don\'t wanna touch (Actually I really don\'t want it, even though they\'re my old friends) try to hug me as an expression of welcome, it\'ll be uncomfortable and pretty annoying...
>>If someone I don\'t want to touch, even though they\'re my old friends, tries to hug me as an expression of welcome, it\'ll be uncomfortable and pretty annoying.
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