Which greeting kind of annoys you?
학생이 쓴 원문
While we are living, we greet people houndreds of times.
There are countless number of greetings such as greeting friends, greeting passing neighbors, and greeting in formal places.
Sometimes, we greet each other happily, but some times we felt annoying after greeting.
For example, someone holds too strong when they are shaking hands so that giving a feeling like they are showing off their strength, not confidence. And, there are a few people who is trying to admonish at the first meet.
That time, I really want to slap on back of their head with a word of abuse. but I always laugh and pass it. becasue I might make a same mistake to someone.
Let\'s greet in a good mood!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Philip. It is indeed necessary to great people politely and in a nice way.
While we are living, we greet people hundreds of times.
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>>> OR: In our whole lives, we would greet people hundred of times.
There are countless number of greetings such as greeting friends, greeting passing neighbors, and greeting in formal places.
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Sometimes, we greet each other happily, but some times we felt annoying after greeting.
>>> Sometimes, we greet each other happily, but we sometimes felt annoyed after greeting.
There are countless number of greetings such as greeting friends, greeting passing neighbors, and greeting in formal places.
>>> correct
Sometimes, we greet each other happily, but some times we felt annoying after greeting.
>>> Sometimes, we greet each other happily, but we sometimes felt annoyed after greeting.
For example, someone holds too strong when they are shaking hands so that giving a feeling like they are showing off their strength, not confidence.
>>> For example, someone grasps one\'s hand strongly when they are shaking hands so that gives out a feeling like they are showing off their strength, not confidence.
And, there are a few people who is trying to admonish at the first meet.
>>> And, there are a few people who try to admonish on the first meeting.
>>> And, there are a few people who try to admonish on the first meeting.
That time, I really want to slap on back of their head with a word of abuse. but I always laugh and pass it. becasue I might make a same mistake to someone.
>>> At that time, I really want to slap them on back of their head with a cuss, but I always laugh and ignore it because I might make the same mistake to someone.
>>> At that time, I really want to slap them on back of their head with a cuss, but I always laugh and ignore it because I might make the same mistake to someone.
Let\'s greet in a good mood!
>>> correct
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