Which greeting kind of annoys you?

2020-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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There is a lot of annoying greeting. if the person who greet to me is my friend, everything is fine not angry not annoy These days some elder people said \"what will you do from this time\" \" what do you do these days\" more and more i got age this situation become. i remember that my cousin heard about same greeting. but now is my turn... it is really stressful and pressure.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], 
That was really fast! It only shows that you are serious about your English studies, and that is really great! Keep it up!
-Rachel
There is a lot of annoying greetings.
>> correct
>> There are lots of annoying greetings.
if the person who greet to me is my friend, everything is fine not angry not annoy
>> If the person who greeted me is my friend, I don\'t get annoyed and I feel fine.
These days some elder people said \"what will you do from this time\" \" what do you do these days\"
more and more i got age this situation become.
>> These days some elderly people keep asking what I am doing  or what I am busying myself with, and I often find myself in this situation.
 i remember that my cousin heard about same greeting. but now is my turn...
>>I remember hearing my cousin talking about this, and I can\'t believe that it is now my turn to be asked.
It is really stressful and pressure.
>> correct
>> It is really stressful and burdensome. 

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