Which greeting kind of annoys you? Why?
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I am annoied when people say hi to me withouth eye-contact.
Because I think it is not sincere but very rude.
(I was so busy this TUE, Wed, so I submit very short essay(?) late. Sorry, Eve:()
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Good day Jamie! That\'s okay, I understand. Thank for your submitting your essay today.
I am annoied when people say hi to me withouth eye-contact.
>> I am annoyed when people say hi to me without having an eye-contact.
Because I think it is not sincere but very rude.
>> Because I think it is not sincere and very rude.
(I was so busy this TUE, Wed, so I submit very short essay(?) late. Sorry, Eve:()
>> I was so busy this Tuesday and Wednesday that\'s why I\'m submitting a very short essay this late. Sorry, Eve.
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