Which greetings are typical in your country?

2019-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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We have several types of greetings we use depending on situations. In this essay, I would like to describe the body language of them. Frist of all, most common thing is to bow, bending our upper body toward counterpart. When we meet an older person, or a senior or a customer, or any situations that we should be polite, this is the most formal way. If we see some people who more bend their body, we think they want to be more polite. Secondly, hand shaking is also a good greeting. Except for customers in shops or restaurants, we usually use it, but it is hard to show our respect. Koreans have many honorific expressions, so we use it with bowing. For example, a younger person slightly bow their body, as he or she moves to a older person to shake hands. If you met someone very close, you could also hug, but this case is quite low. Finally, The most traditional greeting would be to sit on our knees and bow. We usually do it only for ceremonies or rites, like a wedding or a funeral.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jun,

Thank you again for your homework!

Have a great day!

Teacher ELLY.

Which greetings are typical in your country?

We have several types of greetings we use depending on situations.

>>We have several types of greetings that we use, depending on every situation.

In this essay, I would like to describe the body language of them.

>>In this essay, I would like to describe the different body languages.

Frist of all, most common thing is to bow, bending our upper body toward counterpart.

>>First of all, the most common thing is to bow, this is to bend the upper body towards the ground.

When we meet an older person, or a senior or a customer, or any situations that we should be polite, this is the most formal way.

>>When we meet an older person, a senior and a customer, or if we are in any situations that demand politeness, then this is the most formal way.

If we see some people who more bend their body, we think they want to be more polite.

>>If we see some people who bend their bodies very low, we think that they are more polite.

Secondly, hand shaking is also a good greeting.

CORRECT!

or>>Secondly, shaking hands is also another way to give a good greeting.

Except for customers in shops or restaurants, we usually use it, but it is hard to show our respect.

>>Except for the customers in shops or restaurants, we usually use it. Although, it is hard to show our respect.

Koreans have many honorific expressions, so we use it with bowing.

>>Koreans have many honorific expressions, so we use them while bowing.

For example, a younger person slightly bow their body, as he or she moves to a older person to shake hands.

>>For example, a younger person slightly bows his or her body, as he or she moves to an older person for a hand shake.

If you met someone very close, you could also hug, but this case is quite low.

>>If you meet someone very close, you could also hug, but this case is quite a very mild way of showing respect.

Finally, the most traditional greeting would be to sit on our knees and bow.

CORRECT!

or>>Finally, the most common way of a traditional greeting would be to bow while sitting on your knees.

We usually do it only for ceremonies or rites, like a wedding or a funeral.

CORRECT!

or>>We commonly practice this solely for ceremonies or rites, such as a wedding or a funeral.

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