Which habit do you think is the most important for parents to set as an example for their children?
학생이 쓴 원문
First things first, we shouldn\'t scold our children.
Getting scolded is not a happy thing to most children.
They don\'t want to be scolded, they want their parents\' love and attention.
So I think we shouldn\'t scold our children.
We may think that it is one of the lessons, but our children don\'t.
강사 첨삭
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I think instead of scolding, we should talk to our children in a very calm way and explain what they did wrong so that they can fully understand and reflect on it.
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-Teacher EliseFirst things first, we shouldn\'t scold our children.
>>> CORRECT
Getting scolded is not a happy thing to most children.
>> Getting scolded by parents is not a good experience for children.
They don\'t want to be scolded, they want their parents\' love and attention.
>> They don\'t want to be scolded. They want their parents\' love and attention.
So I think we shouldn\'t scold our children.
>> CORRECT
We may think that it is one of the lessons, but our children don\'t.
>> CORRECT
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