Which Harry Potter book is your favorite?
학생이 쓴 원문
Harry Potter translated into Korean is devided seven parts.
the chamber of scerets.
The goblet of fire
The Half blood prince.
The Order of the phoenix.
The deathly hallows.
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But it is too difficult to explain
This story is too long and complicated.
Herry Potter and his friend Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore,Malfoy....take
an adventure at Hogwarts school of Wizardry
아! 표현을 할수 없다
(= I can't express myself. ㅠㅠ @@!?? )
강사 첨삭
But it is too difficult to explain
>> CORRECT
This story is too long and complicated.
>> CORRECT
Herry Potter and his friend Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore,Malfoy....take an adventure at Hogwarts school of Wizardry
>> Harry Potter and his friends Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore and Malfor took on an advanture at Hogward\'s School of Wizardry.
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