Which historical place in your area would be nice to visit?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there isn\'t historical place in my city. But if my foreign friends visit Korea, I\'d like to go with them to Gyeongju. Gyeongju was capital of Silla that is country of Korea before. Silla had beautiful culture. So there are many famous historic site. Bulguksa is the best famous place chosen Unesco World Heritage. In addition, It is forbiden to build an apartment up to 5 floors for protect the value of the city.
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Hello [이름]. thank you for this. I\'ve heard about Bulguksa. It would definitely be a good place to visit.
- T. Beth
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I think there isn\'t historical place in my city. >>> I think there isn\'t any historical place in my city.
But if my foreign friends visit Korea, I\'d like to go with them to Gyeongju.
>>> correct
Gyeongju was capital of Silla that is country of Korea before.
>>> Gyeongju was the capital of Silla which was a dynasty of Korea before.
Silla had beautiful culture.
>>> Silla had a beautiful culture.
So there are many famous historic site.
>>> So there were many famous historic sites.
Bulguksa is the best famous place chosen Unesco World Heritage.
>>> Bulguksa is the most famous place chosen by UNESCO World Heritage.
In addition, It is forbiden to build an apartment up to 5 floors for protect the value of the city.
>>> In addition, it is forbidden to build an apartment higher than 5 floors to protect the value of the city.
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