Which hobbies are the most popular with women in your country? With men?
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Hi, [이름]!
This is a very nice composition. ^^
I have noticed that hobbies in Korea are also very similar in the Philippines.
Women in the Philippines, most especially, have the same hobbies as yours.
Looking forward to more great topics to talk about with you. ^^
~t. Ally
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As for men, I guess the most popular hobby last several decades in Korea would be dining and drinking after work.
>> For men, I guess the most popular hobby for the last several decades in Korea would be dining and drinking after work.
But more people are enjoying various sports like golf, tennis, badminton and table tennis rather than drinking.
>> CORRECT!
As the social culture which has emphasized on the importance of workplace is changing to more family oriented one, people are seeking personal hobbies that are contributive to their healty and family.
>> As the social culture which emphasizes on the importance of the workplace is changing to a more family-oriented one, people are seeking personal hobbies that are contributive to their health and family.
Popular hobbies for women are chatting with friends in cafe, watching TV and searching intenet for shooping.
>> Popular hobbies for women are chatting with friends at the café, watching TV and online shopping.
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