Which hobbies are the most popular with women in your country?
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I don\'t know exactly which hobbies are the most popular with women in Korea. I know some women around me, they go shopping or eat out for delicious food and grap a brunch like me. Surely chatting is very important.
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I don\'t know exactly which hobbies are the most popular with women in Korea.
>> CORRECT.
I know some women around me, they go shopping or eat out for delicious food and grap a brunch like me.
>> I know some women around me who go shopping or eat out for delicious food and grab brunch like me.
Surely chatting is very important.
>> Surely, chatting is very important.
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