Which hobbise are the most popular in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most popiar of hobbies in my country is to play sports
The Korean people are many interested in health
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I think it is a very good hobby because people need to be healthy. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> The most popular hobby in my country is to play sports.
>> Or: The most popular hobby in my country is playing sports.
The Korean people are many interested in health
The Korean people are many interested in health
>> Many Korean people are very interested in health.
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