Which house can you say is comfortable?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a child, I used to stay grandmother house. Although it was very old house, I liked to visit grandmother house.
My grandmother was very nice for me.
She made me a delicious cook.
My grandmother’s house was srrounded mountains.
I often used to hear a sing of birds.
It was quite calm and comfortable place.
I loved my grandmother house.
I want to say that comfortable house is place to spending time and being with someone who I feel comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름] [이름], How was your day? While reading your homework, it also reminds me of my younger years. It\'s nice to grew up with grandma, right?
Aki :)
When I was a child, I used to stay grandmother house. Although it was very old house, I liked to visit grandmother house.
>>> When I was a child, I used to stay in my grandmother\'s house. Although it was a very old house, I still liked to visit her house.
>>> When I was a child, I used to stay in my grandmother\'s old house. I liked visiting her house.
My grandmother was very nice for me.
>>> My grandmother was very nice to me.
She made me a delicious cook.
>>> She made delicious food.
>>> She cooked delicious food.
My grandmother’s house was srrounded mountains.
>>> My grandmother’s house was surrounded by mountains.
I often used to hear a sing of birds.
>>> I often used to hear the birds singing.
>>> I often used to hear the birds chirping.
It was quite calm and comfortable place.
>>> It was quite calm and a comfortable place.
>>> It was quite calm and comfortable.
I loved my grandmother house.
>>> I loved my grandmother\'s house.
I want to say that comfortable house is place to spending time and being with someone who I feel comfortable.
>>> I want to say that a comfortable house is a place for spending time and being with someone who I feel comfortable with.
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