which invention is better between electricity and internet

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>> T. Amanda:)

I think that electricity is more useful invention than internet.

>> I think that electricity is a more useful invention than the internet.

There are no doubt Internet is one of the greatest inventions.

>> There is no doubt that internet is one of the greatest inventions.

But without electricity Internet couldn`t be invented at all.

>>But without electricity, the Internet wouldn\'t have been invented at all.

We can use computer due to invention of electricity also car, bulbs. and We can turn night into day, turn winter into summer so on so on so on.

>> We are able to use computer due to the invention of electricity. Not only that, we are also able to make and use cars, bulbs and others. Due to electricity, we can turn night into day, turn winter into summer, and so on and so fort.

>> OR: Due to the invention of electricity, we are able to use the internet using our computers, phones, tablets and other gadgets.

Electricity also helps build cars, airplanes, ships, railways, and other modes of transportation. With the aid of electricity, we can turn night into day, turn winter into summer, and others.

Even thoght I really thank who invented electricity maybe edison(?) haha. Because I can talk to my T.amanda. But I stil think electricity is better invention than Internet.

>> I am thankful to whoever invented the internet, maybe Edison. Haha. It gives me the option to study English online with T. Amanda. However, I still think that electricity is  a better invention than the Internet.

TRIVIA:

*** Benjamin Franklin invented electricity.

*** Vinton Cerf and Robert Kahn invented the internet.