Which is a better way to spend your holiday, go away on vacation or go on staycation?
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Whenever I have a holiday, I go away to somewhere or anywhere. I prefer go out instead of staying at home. I want to see and take photos and eat delious food.
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Whenever I have a holiday, I go away to somewhere or anywhere.
>> I go somewhere or anywhere whenever I have a holiday.
I prefer go out instead of staying at home.
>> I prefer going out to staying at home.
I want to see and take photos and eat delious food.
>> I want to go sightseeing, take photos, and eat delicious food.
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