Which is always the best part of your day?

2021-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

The best part of my day is on Power English class. I always enjoy this class with you and I felt that my English skill still improve from you teaching me. So, When I get up at morning, I can do it happily. Sometimes, I might wake up late for having a lot of work last day. But, I should participate in this class. Thank you for teaching me~

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]! You must be working hard now but I believe that hard work with passion will make you successful!-Faith-
The best part of my day is on Power English class. 
>> The best part of my day is in Power English class. 
I always enjoy this class with you and I felt that my English skill still improve from you teaching me. 
>> I always enjoy this class with you and I feel that my English skill still improves from your teaching. 
So, When I get up at morning, I can do it happily. 
>> So, when I get up in the morning, I can do it happily. 
Sometimes, I might wake up late for having a lot of work last day. 
>> Sometimes, I might wake up late for having a lot of work the previous day. 
But, I should participate in this class. 
>> CORRECT
Thank you for teaching me~
>> Thank you for teaching me!~ 

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