Which is always the best part of your day?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, morning is the best part of my day. This is because at that time I can feel the fresh air. To explain, In the morning I usually go to the gym to work out. While I go to the gym, I can feel the fresh air, and it helps me improve my mental energy. Although little bit tired, I can remove my stress from fresh air. Moreover, many people already work on the street. Such as; a dustman. So, I can feel that I have to live harder. It means that in the morning, most of the people are usually in the bed. However, they already work on the street. Finally, there are proper reasons that I think the best part of my day is morning.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [이름] [이름]! I can relate to you. I used to feel motivated working late at night but since I started working early in the morning, I learned to appreciate the little things and joys that the morning brings, too.
-T. Sonny
In my opinion, morning is the best part of my day.
>>Correct!
This is because at that time I can feel the fresh air.
>>Correct!
To explain, In the morning I usually go to the gym to work out.
>>To explain, in the morning I usually go to the gym to work out.
While I go to the gym, I can feel the fresh air, and it helps me improve my mental energy.
>>On my way to the gym, I can feel the fresh air, which helps me improve my mental strength.
Although little bit tired, I can remove my stress from fresh air.
>>Although a little bit tired, I can relieve my stress through the fresh air.
Moreover, many people already work on the street.
>>Moreover, many people start their day early working on the street.
Such as; a dustman.
>>For example, the street sweepers.
So, I can feel that I have to live harder.
>>So, I feel motivated to live harder.
It means that in the morning, most of the people are usually in the bed.
>>I mean, in the morning, most people are still in bed.
However, they already work on the street.
>>However, in their case, they have to start working.
Finally, there are proper reasons that I think the best part of my day is morning.
>>For these reasons, I would say that morning is the best part of my day.
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