Which is always the best part of your day?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like the time which my son falls asleep at 8~9 o\'clock.
I can do everything what I want such as watching TV, taking a shower, talking to my honey and drinking a coffee and so on.
It only seems to be free time to me.
But, I just have time an hour. When my son falls a sleep, I\'m already exhausted. So, I fall a sleep within 2 hours. ㅡㅜ
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. I guess it\'s good to take advantage of that 2 hours free time to also rest.
- T. Beth
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I like the time which my son falls asleep at 8~9 o\'clock.>>> I like the time when my son falls asleep at 8~9 o\'clock.
I can do everything what I want such as watching TV, taking a shower, talking to my honey and drinking a coffee and so on.
I can do everything what I want such as watching TV, taking a shower, talking to my honey and drinking a coffee and so on.
>>> I can do everything that I want such as watching TV, taking a shower, talking to my honey and drinking coffee and so on.
It only seems to be free time to me.
>>> It seems to be the only free time for me.
But, I just have time an hour.
>>> But, I only have an hour.
When my son falls a sleep, I\'m already exhausted.
>>> correct
So, I fall a sleep within 2 hours.
>>> So, I fall asleep within 2 hours.
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