Which is better, a big family or a small family?

2024-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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I think big family is better than small family, if I have big family can get more allowance and I\'m not boring because there are more people to play with me. And I don\'t have to go to the countryside for the holidays.

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Hi [이름]!

Thank you!

I think big family is better than small family, if I have big family can get more allowance and I\'m not boring because there are more people to play with me.
And I don\'t have to go to the countryside for the holidays.

>> I think a big family is better than a small family because if I have a big family, I can get more allowance and I will not be bored because there are more people to play with me and I don\'t have to go to the countryside for the holidays.

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