Which is better, big supermarkets, small grocery stores or outdoor markets?
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In my opinion, big supermarkets are better than small grocery stores and outdoor markets. The big supermarkets have a lot of kinds things including grovery, furniture and daily necessity ets. So we can buy many things we want at once. I think that we don\'t need to go shopping many times. It is saving our time. Also, in big supermarkets, it is possible to purchase in bulk. Therefore, i believe that big supermarkets are more convenient than small one.
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Thanks for doing your homework Ms. [이름]. It\'s a great idea. ^^
T. James
In my opinion, big supermarkets are better than small grocery stores and outdoor markets.
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The big supermarkets have a lot of kinds things including grovery, furniture and daily necessity ets.
>>> The big supermarkets have a lot of kind of things, including grocery, furniture and daily necessity its.
So we can buy many things we want at once.
>>> CORRECT
I think that we don\'t need to go shopping many times.
>>> CORRECT
It is saving our time.
>> CORRECT
Also, in big supermarkets, it is possible to purchase in bulk.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore, i believe that big supermarkets are more convenient than small one.
>>> Therefore, I believe that the big supermarkets are more convenient than small ones.
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