Which is better, borrowing or lending stuff? Explain your answers.
학생이 쓴 원문
Lending is better for me.
I lend stuff to only friends which have good relationship with me.
If someone who is not friendly with me ask to borrow, I don\'t lend.
However, lending stuff is good for me too.
Of course I get the stuff which I need, I can make more friendly with the person who lend it for me.
After I borrow stuff, I usually give a small gift for the people.
Then, I can make my impression become good to them.
Some of my friends can\'t say to borrow because they are sorry and uncomfortable about borrow.
For them, I say to ask that can I lend something first.
Then, I can be given their thanks and can make a good friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for answering another homework. Take note of your corrections and make your sentences in the right grammar. :)
-T. Maine
>>Correct.
I lend stuff to only friends which have good relationship with me.
I lend stuff to only friends which have good relationship with me.
>>I only lend some stuff to my friends who have a good relationship with me.
If someone who is not friendly with me ask to borrow, I don\'t lend.
If someone who is not friendly with me ask to borrow, I don\'t lend.
>>If someone who is not friendly to me wants to borrow my stuff, I will not lend her anything.
However, lending stuff is good for me too.
However, lending stuff is good for me too.
>>Correct.
Of course I get the stuff which I need, I can make more friendly with the person who lend it for me.
Of course I get the stuff which I need, I can make more friendly with the person who lend it for me.
>>Of course, I can get the stuff I need and I can be friendly with the person who lent me something.
After I borrow stuff, I usually give a small gift for the people.
After I borrow stuff, I usually give a small gift for the people.
>>After borrowing, I usually give a small gift to the person who lent me.
Then, I can make my impression become good to them.
Then, I can make my impression become good to them.
>>Then, I can make a good impression to them.
Some of my friends can\'t say to borrow because they are sorry and uncomfortable about borrow.
Some of my friends can\'t say to borrow because they are sorry and uncomfortable about borrow.
>>Some of my friends don\'t want to borrow anything because they feel sorry and uncomfortable when borrowing.
For them, I say to ask that can I lend something first.
For them, I say to ask that can I lend something first.
>>I inform them that I can lend some of my stuff.
Then, I can be given their thanks and can make a good friends.
Then, I can be given their thanks and can make a good friends.
>>Then they feel grateful and make friends with me.
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