Which is better for you, landscape or cityscape? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer a cityscape because I am fascinated by a night view whenever I look down it from a high tower.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Judy!
The cityscape is breathtaking at night. The lights are just like stars and it is a marvel made by men. Anyway, thank you very much for this short but complete answer. As you can see, I have a grammar suggestion using \'the\' instead of the article \'a\' and also, towards the end of your sentence, I places \'below\' as an alternative of for the word \'down\' because \'look down\' means \'look less\' as an idiom in English.
See you again next week.
T. Donna~
>> I prefer a cityscape because I am fascinated by the night view whenever I look at it (down/ below) from a high tower.
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