Which is better for young people in order to prepare for the future, study full time or become a wor
학생이 쓴 원문
I think becoming a working student is better for young people in order to prepare for the future.
Being a working student also offers many benefits to young people. First, working students have the opportunity to connect theory with practice through real job experience. By balancing work and study, students can apply what they are learning in real situations, which helps maximize their learning effectiveness.
Second, working students can experience financial independence. By covering their own tuition and living expenses, they can develop financial management skills, which become important assets as they transition into adulthood. Additionally, through work experience, they learn time management and responsibility.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Hana! Being responsible is a woderful trait, and for me, it is best done early in life. We are what we become. So we of learn the value of hardwork early, we tend to carry the character until we become old. Thank you for this wonderful answer. See you in the class!
--Teacher Anji
I think becoming a working student is better for young people in order to prepare for the future.
>> CORRECT
Being a working student also offers many benefits to young people.
Being a working student also offers many benefits to young people.
>> CORRECT
First, working students have the opportunity to connect theory with practice through real job experience.
>> CORRECT
By balancing work and study, students can apply what they are learning in real situations, which helps maximize their learning effectiveness.
>> CORRECT
Second, working students can experience financial independence.
>> CORRECT
Second, working students can experience financial independence.
>> CORRECT
By covering their own tuition and living expenses, they can develop financial management skills, which become important assets as they transition into adulthood.
>> CORRECT
Additionally, through work experience, they learn time management and responsibility.
>> CORRECT
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