Which is better, private school, public school or homeschooling?

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Parents in Korea are crazily interested in education.

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Private school has a lot of advantages for students who are clever.

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They can be educated by more professional teachers and learn deeper education.

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However, it cause a social problem that everyone wants to enter a private school.

>> However, it causes a social problem wherein everyone wants to enter a private school.

As a result, the house price near a private school is getting more expensive and education also get hike.

>> As a result, the house price near a private school is getting more expensive and the cost of education also gets a hike.

it cause regional polarization too.

>> It causes regional polarization too.

So current government would like to close a private school because of its disadvantages.

>> Therefore, the current government would like to close private schools because of its disadvantages.

Public school also has a problem caused by education interests and private school.

>> Public schools also have a problem caused by students being more interested in entering private institutions.

Students don\'t want to study at public school because of the curriculum.

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The education contents of public school is worse than private school\'s one.

>> The educational contents of public schools are worse than that of the private schools.

So, students in public school attend to the institute such as English, math and piano.

>> That\'s the reason why students in public schools attend other institutions such as English, Math and piano classes.

They are preparing for lessons in advance before their grade.

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