Which is better, Starbucks or your local coffee shop?
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I think a local coffee shop is better than Starbucks.
>> Correct.
When I sometimes went to Starbucks, I was always disappointed.
>> Whenever I go to Starbucks, I would always be disappointed.
Their menus are too expensive in comparison with their quantity and quality.
>> Their menus are too expensive when we talk about its quantity and quality.
I felt that I waste my money.
>> I felt like I wasted my money.
On the other hand, most local coffee shops are not very expensive like Starbucks.
>> Correct.
Even though they are expensive, their tastes are good.
>> Even though they are not expensive they still taste good.
Also, they are decorated nicely.
>> Correct.
If we go to the local coffee shop, we can enjoy their own mood and tastes.
>> Correct.
That\'s why I prefer the local shop than Starbucks.
>> Correct.
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