Which is better, Starbucks or your local coffee shop?

2019-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sandy

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I think a local coffee shop is better than Starbucks. When I sometimes went to Starbucks, I was always disappointed. Their menus are too expensive in comparison with their quantity and quality. I felt that I waste my money. On the other hand, most local coffee shops are not very expensive like Starbucks. Even though they are expensive, their tastes are good. Also, they are decorated nicely. If we go to the local coffee shop, we can enjoy their own mood and tastes. That\'s why I prefer the local shop than Starbucks.

강사 첨삭

Hello Chloe! Thank you for doing your homework today. Keep it up!  Below are your corrections. Please take note of them and continue practicing. Have a nice day!

-Teacher Sandy-

I think a local coffee shop is better than Starbucks.

>> Correct.
 When I sometimes went to Starbucks, I was always disappointed.

>> Whenever I go to Starbucks, I would always be disappointed.
 Their menus are too expensive in comparison with their quantity and quality.

>> Their menus are too expensive when we talk about its quantity and quality. 
 I felt that I waste my money.

>> I felt like I wasted my money.
 On the other hand, most local coffee shops are not very expensive like Starbucks.

>> Correct.
 Even though they are expensive, their tastes are good.

>> Even though they are not expensive they still taste good.
 Also, they are decorated nicely.

>> Correct.
 If we go to the local coffee shop, we can enjoy their own mood and tastes.

>> Correct.
 That\'s why I prefer the local shop than Starbucks.

>> Correct.


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