Which is better, studying in a private school, public school or homeschooling?

2021-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think that studying in a private school is the best way to study. In Korea, Learning in public school doesn\'t need lots of money. But, if you go to a private school, you should pay a lot. Because the private school offers high quality classes. Teachers of the private school are well known experts each fields. And, I can be a way to join high society. A man who had gotten high quality can be raised to a higher position. If I graduate the private school, I can have a connection with them.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]ny! :)
Thank you for honestly answering this question. 
It is still a debate in my country as to which one is better. However, out here, it doesn\'t really matter if you graduated from a private school or a public school as long as you were able to meet the requirements that they are looking for in companies. I do understand the situation in your country though because I know that education is viewed differently out there and is often seen with so much regards. 
Anyhow,  I hope you\'re having a great evening. See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

I think that studying in a private school is the best way to study. 
>> I think that studying in a private school is the best. 
In Korea, Learning in public school doesn\'t need lots of money. 
>> In Korea, learning in a public school doesn\'t need lots of money.
But, if you go to a private school, you should pay a lot. 
>> CORRECT!
Because the private school offers high quality classes. 
>> This is because private schools offer high quality of classes. 
Teachers of the private school are well known experts each fields. 
>> Teachers in private schools are well-known experts in each of their fields. 
And, I can be a way to join high society. 
>> In addition, it provides a status that allows you to join the upper class in the society. 
A man who had gotten high quality can be raised to a higher position.
>> A man who has received a high quality of education can achieve a higher position in the society. 
If I graduate the private school, I can have a connection with them.
>> If I graduated in a private school, I can have better connections. 

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