Which is better, studying in a private school, public school, or homeschooling?
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Actually, I don\'t know differences about a private and public school. It\'s because almost everything from my generation to private schools, and I grew up there with an education. But I can say about the worst studying is homeschooling. I think school is a place where I can develop social skills, So I don\'t like it.
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Actually, I don\'t know differences about a private and public school.
>> Actually, I don\'t know the differences of private and public schools.
It\'s because almost everything from my generation to private schools, and I grew up there with an education.
>> It\'s because most people from my generation study in private school so I grew up with that kind of education.
But I can say about the worst studying is homeschooling.
>> I can say that the worst thing is homeschooling.
I think school is a place where I can develop social skills, So I don\'t like it
>> In think schools are great places to develop social skills so I don\'t like it.
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