Which is better to do in the park: reading a book or having a picnic? Why?
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I want to do picnic. Because reading a book is little boring,
but!! picnic can eat treats and run around the park!:]
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Which is better to do in the park: reading a book or having a picnic? Why?
I want to do picnic. Because reading a book is little boring,
>> I want to have a picnic because reading a book is a little boring.
OR >> It is better to have a picnic in the park because reading a book is a little boring.
but!! picnic can eat treats and run around the park!:]
>> But a picnic is more fun, you can eat treats and run around the park!
OR >> At a picnic, you can eat treats and run around the park!
>> I want to have a picnic because reading a book is a little boring.
OR >> It is better to have a picnic in the park because reading a book is a little boring.
but!! picnic can eat treats and run around the park!:]
>> But a picnic is more fun, you can eat treats and run around the park!
OR >> At a picnic, you can eat treats and run around the park!
I also think that a picnic is better, especially if the food is delicious! ^^
- Elly~
- Elly~
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