Which is far better? High school life or university life. Write an essay and explain why

2015-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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I think university life is far better. Because, in Korea, high school students are suffering for studying too much tasks. On the other hand, university students are with a lot of freedom. They are enjoying youth. Such as, making boyfriends or girlfriends. I think that high school students suffer hell, at least in Korea.

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This is the other composition I checked, Mr. [이름]. I believe I have heard this story even before. And it is not surprising anymore for me, yet alarming. I hope that high school students can endure the nature of their school days. See you later!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ I think university life is far better. >> Correct.Because, in Korea, high school students are suffering for studying too much tasks.>> Because in Korea, high school students are suffering from studying too much tasks. On the other hand, university students are with a lot of freedom. >> On the other hand, university students have a lot of freedom. They are enjoying youth.  >> They are enjoying their youth. Such as, making boyfriends or girlfriends. >> Correct. or>> Such as commiting themselves in a relationship.I think that high school students suffer hell, at least in Korea. >> I think that high school students suffer like in hell in Korea.

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