Which is heavier,an iphone or a samsung Galaxy phone? Is the weight of a phone important to you? Why
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An iphone is heavier than a Galaxy phone.
I think the weight of phone is not important to me because l don\\\'t use phone many times.
I like a Galaxy phone because our country\\\'s company is made Galaxy phone.
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Which is heavier, an iPhone or a Samsung Galaxy phone? Is the weight of a phone important to you? Why?
An iphone is heavier than a Galaxy phone.
>> An iPhone is heavier than a Galaxy phone.
I think the weight of phone is not important to me because l don\\\'t use phone many times.
>> I think the phone\'s weight is unimportant because l don\'t use my phone often.
I like a Galaxy phone because our country\\\'s company is made Galaxy phone.
>> I like Galaxy phones because Samsung is a Korean company.
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