which is more annoying,---- ?
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I'd be more annoying finding out I don't have enough money to pay for something i really need.
Being caught in the rain without an umbrella is just a little uncomfortable thing. after being caught, I get home and take a bath and change clothes, that time I can feel very fresh and comfortable. it makes me want to drink hot coffee. I'd like to say that somewhat It is romantic situation.
But It'would be very hard for me that I don't have enough money to pay for something I really need. In my case. I tend to think about thing I need all the time, even I can not sleep well. so I'll try to save money and finally I'll buy that one.
the older I am, the more I want, but it can't be satisfied.
so I have to think about something is really necessary or not.
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Hello there! :)
It\'s really great of you to write this composition and sent it to me.
I really appreciate your effort. :)
Your ideas and sentences are amazing! Keep it up!
Anyway, I do agree with your choice. :)
I also wrote down my corrections for your sentences.
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T. Dorcy
I\'d be more annoying finding out I don\'t have enough money to pay for something i really need. >>It would be more annoying to find out that I don\'t have enough money to pay for something I really need.Being caught in the rain without an umbrella is just a little uncomfortable thing.
>>Correct!
after being caught, I get home and take a bath and change clothes, that time I can feel very fresh and comfortable.
>>After being caught in the rain, I will go home, take a bath and change clothes. After doing these, I will feel very fresh and comfortable.
it makes me want to drink hot coffee.
>>It makes me want to drink hot coffee.
I\'d like to say that somewhat It is romantic situation.>>I\'d like to say that somehow it is romantic.But It\'would be very hard for me that I don\'t have enough money to pay for something I really need.
>>But it would be very hard for me if I don\'t have enough money to pay for something I really need.
In my case. I tend to think about thing I need all the time, even I can not sleep well.
>>In my case, I tend to think about the things I need all the time, I cannot even sleep well.
so I\'ll try to save money and finally I\'ll buy that one.>>Correct!the older I am, the more I want, but it can\'t be satisfied.
>>The older I am, the more I want but I can\'t be satisfied.
>>OR: As I grow old, I want more things but they don\'t satisfy me.so I have to think about something is really necessary or not.
>>So, I have to think if it\'s really necessary to buy or not.
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