Which is more convenient: a package tour or traveling independently? Why?
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Well, each one seems to have their own strengths and weaknesses.
The advantage of a package tour is that if I pay, I don\'t have to care about my flight ticket to my hotel. However, there are things I have to do, such as shopping and I only move on a set course so I can\'t travel freely. Also, hotels or restaurants may or may not be good, so it is uncertain and unstable.
Traveling independently will be an advantage of package travel.
Since I design everything myself, I can set the course as I want and choose all the good things. However, I have to think about if for a long time and make a plan and depending on the plan, it can be expensive.
Compared to convenience, package tour seems more convenient.
Because package tour can be enjoyed all by simply following the route that has already been set, which directs me to the restaurant.
But if I choose what I prefer, I prefer traveling independently.
Because even if I go on a trip, I like to look at and eat as I want.
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Hi!
Thank you so much for sending your answer to me.
I appreciate your thoughts about package and individual tours. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Each choice comes with advantages and disadvantages.
The advantage of a package tour is that if I pay, I don\'t have to care about my flight ticket to my hotel.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: A package tour saves me from worrying about transportation and lodging.
However, there are things I have to do, such as shopping and I only move on a set course so I can\'t travel freely.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: However, I have to stick to a set itinerary, which reduces flexibility.
Also, hotels or restaurants may or may not be good, so it is uncertain and unstable.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Also, the quality of hotels or restaurants can be uncertain.
Traveling independently will be an advantage of package travel.
>> Traveling independently has advantages over package travel.
Since I design everything myself, I can set the course as I want and choose all the good things.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Since I plan everything myself, I can choose my own route and select what I like.
However, I have to think about if for a long time and make a plan and depending on the plan, it can be expensive.
>> However, it takes a long time to plan, and depending on the plan, it can be expensive.
Compared to convenience, package tour seems more convenient.
>> In terms of convenience, package tours are more convenient.
Because package tour can be enjoyed all by simply following the route that has already been set, which directs me to the restaurant.
>> This is because package tours can be enjoyed simply by following a pre-set route that includes restaurants.
But if I choose what I prefer, I prefer traveling independently.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: However, if I choose based on preference, I prefer traveling independently.
Because even if I go on a trip, I like to look at and eat as I want.
>> This is because I like to see places and eat whatever I want when I travel.
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