Which is more effective for reducing stress: changing your mindset or changing your lifestyle?
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When I need to reduce stress, I usually do hobby such as a playing game, watching TV, doing swim.
These are all activities not mindset.
Therefore, I guess changing lifestyle is more effective for reducing stress.
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When I need to reduce stress, I usually do hobby such as a playing game, watching TV, doing swim.
>> When I feel stressed, I usually do hobbies like playing games, watching TV, and swimming.
These are all activities not mindset.
>> These are activities rather than mindsets.
Therefore, I guess changing lifestyle is more effective for reducing stress.
>> So, I think changing my lifestyle is more effective for reducing stress.
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