Which is more effective in expressing how you feel: Words or Actions?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the effective way is words. It\'s because if I get some actions as I angry, it can become fighting.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ridoria! That\'s a good point. We do not want anything to turn into violence.
-T. Sonny
I think the effective way is words. >>I think the most effective way is through words.
It\'s because if I get some actions as I angry, it can become fighting.
>>It\'s because if I do some actions when I am angry, it can turn into a fight.
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