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It has been a long debated and controversial topic whether we should focus on protecting people, which requires putting some level of restriction on their choices or offer them with unlimited freedom so that they can live in whatever manner they prefer.

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Balancing between the two is important.

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We shouldn’t intervene in other people’s rights too much unless they don’t harm or infringe other people’s rights.

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Whereas we shouldn’t just be spectators for the people who approach life with reckless abandon as well.

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What if they take drugs, are addicted to gambling or become alcoholic?

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Should we let them live in their own ways because it is their lives and choices?

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We, as a member of society, are obliged to help others who are in a difficult situation to live well together.

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Pursuing my own wellbeing is selfish and the society won’t appreciate it.

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If their choices are obviously incorrect, we should be willing to advise and guide them to a correct direction, espeically when they are young.

>> Better: If their choices are obviously incorrect, we should be willing to advise and guide them to the good direction, espeically when they are young.