Which is more important, eating or sleeping?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think sleeping is important than eating. Because when you didn't sleep, you'll be very tired so you can't be eat something. Also sleeping is very important. Because when you didn't have a sleep your condition will be bad so you won't do anything. So I think sleeping is important than eating.
강사 첨삭
I think sleeping is important than eating. Because when you didn\'t sleep, you\'ll be very tired so you can\'t be eat something. Also sleeping is very important. Because when you didn\'t have a sleep your condition will be bad so you won\'t do anything. So I think sleeping is important than eating.
[이름], this homework is already done ^^
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