Which is more important in a tema: having talented members or having good teamwork?
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I think having good teamwork is more important.
Because it seems that teamwork is good to create an atmosphere in which we can perform something, and unity is created by ourselves. Also, if we have good teamwork, people who naturally evaluate it will notice.
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Hey, Ji [이름]. Thank you for checking the homework and sharing your thoughts. You produce coherent sentences, supporting details, and appropriate linking words. Your tone is appropriate for short essays. I hope you have a wonderful weekend with your loved ones. Until next time. ~Teacher Jane ^_^
I think having good teamwork is more important.
>> CORRECT
Because it seems that teamwork is good to create an atmosphere in which we can perform something, and unity is created by ourselves.
>> Because it seems that teamwork is good for creating an atmosphere in which we can perform something, and unity is created by ourselves.
Also, if we have good teamwork, people who naturally evaluate it will notice.
>> CORRECT
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