Which is more important: saving a species or encouraging development of land so that people have mor
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Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for taking the time to do your essay homework in our class.
I loved reading this essay.
It is true that once the environment gets destroyed, we would both lose our jobs and our home.
I hope you\'re having a great night.
See you again next week. ^^
~Teacher Charry :)
I think saving a species is more important.
>> CORRECT!
Development can be done at any time, but the environment cannot be undone if it is destroyed.
>> Land development can be done at any time, but the environment cannot be brought back to it\'s natural state once it is destroyed.
If the environment is destroyed, not only jobs but the world can be destroyed.
>> If the environment is destroyed, we would not only lose jobs but the world can be destroyed as well.
And there are so many ways to increase your job that you can use other methods.
>> In addition, there are so many ways or methods that we can use to increase the number of jobs.
So it is wrong to destroy the environment for development.
>> CORRECT!
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