Which is more pleasant, forgiving or taking revenge?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually so far I want to revenge to someone. When I have some dificult problems I became upset about that and it\'s not easy to forgivng. but I always feel bad when I revenged someone. For example, when someone hates me or make mistake, I express my feeling and I acted same that person.
But now I realized that is more bad thing.
Forgiving make me feel comfortable. It\'s something you won\'t know until you try it. Forgiving will be easy to erase bad memorise and each people feel good than revenge.
Forgiving make me a big person who are mature person.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Good choice! Forgiveness is the act of forgetting and this also will make you feel better most of the time. Put yourself in others\' shoes to understand how they feel. Be kind and do what is good. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Actually, so far, I want to take revenge on someone.
When I have some dificult problems I became upset about that and it\'s not easy to forgivng.
>>When I have some difficult problems, I become upset about them and it\'s not easy to forgive.
but I always feel bad when I revenged someone.
>>But I always feel bad and I revenge on someone.
For example, when someone hates me or make mistake, I express my feeling and I acted same that person.
>> For example, when someone hates me or make mistakes, I express my feeling and act the same to that person.
But now I realized that is more bad thing.
But now I realized that is more bad thing.
>> But now I realized that it is a worse situation.
Forgiving make me feel comfortable.
Forgiving make me feel comfortable.
>> Forgiving makes me feel comfortable.
It\'s something you won\'t know until you try it.
>> Correct.
Forgiving will be easy to erase bad memorise and each people feel good than revenge.
>> Forgiving will easily erase bad memories and each person will feel better than revenge.
Forgiving make me a big person who are mature person.
Forgiving make me a big person who are mature person.
>> Forgiving makes me feel like a big person who matures.
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