Which is worse, failing or never trying?

2012-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Make a composition answering this question: Which is worse, failing or never trying? There are two types of people, failing after tried or never trying. Except in the case such as threatening life or an economical risk through the trying, never trying is worse than failing. To experience a miserable failujre is benefit for peaple. According to suffering, people figure out where they stand, why they fail, and what they have to do next. That is, it means they are given the chance to develop by failing. After that they do next, they will be able to promote their life than before. On the contrary, never trying people have no improvement. In addition, due to the negative behavior which does not take a role of difficult, dangerous, and dirty fobs, the others do not want to work with those people. Eventually, they are going to fail their life whatever they do. Moreover, when they realize where they are, they will perceive that they are late to try to start again.

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Hello Mr. [이름]! Wow! You have meritorious ideas about our homework! Good job! Well I agree that never trying is worse than failing. Whatever difficulties in life we may go through we have to face it with courage because we will not really learn something if we don't give a try. Right? We should learn from our mistakes and we should take failures positively. By the way Sir, here are my corrections. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me. I will talk to you later. Enjoy your day. Have fun! -Teacher Chloe Make a composition answering this question: Which is worse, failing or never trying?There are two types of people, failing after tried or never trying. >>There are two types of people, who fails and giving a try and who don't want to fail and never give a try. They are the 'failing' and the 'never trying'. Except in the case such as threatening life or an economical risk through the trying, never trying is worse than failing. >>Except in the cases that threatens life like economical problems. Taking risks to solve such things that might lead to a failure is better than never trying of doing something.To experience a miserable failujre is benefit for peaple. >>To experience a miserable failure is beneficial to people. According to suffering, people figure out where they stand, why they fail, and what they have to do next. >>Correct That is, it means they are given the chance to develop by failing. >>It means that they are given the chance to develop something for themselves by failing. After that they do next, they will be able to promote their life than before. >>If they try doing something though they failed, it will be able to help them for the betterment of their lives. On the contrary, never trying people have no improvement. >>On the contrary, 'never trying' people do not have improvements. >> On the contrary, 'never trying people' have no rooms for improvement. In addition, due to the negative behavior which does not take a role of difficult, dangerous, and dirty fobs, the others do not want to work with those people. >>Correct Eventually, they are going to fail their life whatever they do. >>Eventually, they are going to fail their lives whatever they do. Moreover, when they realize where they are, they will perceive that they are late to try to start again. >>Correct

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