Which is worse; failing or never trying?
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Hi Sir [이름] ^^
Happy Thursday. ^^
You are definitely right. ^^
We should not give up even we encounter difficulties.
Learn from our mistakes and we should always keep an eye on our goal.
Like in English, it is a continuous process of learning.
Once we give up, we won\'t achieve what we really want.
Thanks for an inspiring essay.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I think never trying at all is worse than failing.
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It’s better to try even if we fail.
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We can fail, however, failure can teach us lessons and help us grow and mature.
>> Better: We can fail, however, failure can teach us lessons and help us grow and be mature.
Never trying leaves us with nothing.
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We can’t achieve what we dream of if we don’t try because of the fear of failure.
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>> OR: We can’t achieve what we dream of if we don’t try because of the fear of failing.
If we never failed at some point in our lives, obviously everything we\'ve done is too easy for us.
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And there\'s really nothing fun about something being way too easy for us.
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It is another matter how many times or how long we have to try if we fail continuously.
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If we didn’t try, we would regret what we have not tried.
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Life is full of challenges, no matter you want them or not.
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Most of the successful people in the world have failed at least once before they became really successful.
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The bottom line is if we don\'t try, we’ll fail automatically.
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But if we try and fail, we\'ll eventually learn to be good at it if we keep trying.
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Trying something is painful sometiems, but we have to overcome it.
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