Which is worse for your health, smoking every day or drinking every day?
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For me, drinking is worse than smoking every day. You know, I always smoke every day as one pack every other day. It doesn\'t matter how much I smoke because it doesn\'t affect daily life. But, I don\'t have enough strength. And, I can\'t drink every day. In addition to that, I have a river cancer of family history. So, I should be careful about drinking than smoking. I drunk bear with my friends after a class today. But, I saw someone who is disgusting. I\'ll tell you soon. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
For me, drinking is worse than smoking every day.
>> CORRECT!You know, I always smoke every day as one pack every other day.
>> You know, I always smoke every day, and I can finish one pack every other day.
It doesn\'t matter how much I smoke because it doesn\'t affect daily life.
>> It doesn\'t matter how much I smoke because it doesn\'t affect my daily life.
But, I don\'t have enough strength.
>> CORRECT!And, I can\'t drink every day.
>> CORRECT!In addition to that, I have a river cancer of family history.
>> In addition to that, I have a family history of liver cancer.
So, I should be careful about drinking than smoking.
>> CORRECT!
I drunk bear with my friends after a class today.
>> I drunk beer with my friends after class today.
But, I saw someone who is disgusting.
>> CORRECT!
I\'ll tell you soon. :)
>> CORRECT!
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