Which is your busiest day of the week?
학생이 쓴 원문
Before the winter vacation, school days were the busiest. Because i had to wake up early everyday. And afterschool, i went to the gym. I felt everyday was too long. But after the winter vacation, friday and weekend is the busiest. Because i go to the part-time job at friday and weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I appreciate your effort in doing your homework.
I would like to emphasize how you used the \"after winter vacation\"- You should use WHEN WINTER VACATION HAS STARTED\". For now, your winter vacation is not over yet, right?
Please take note of this. Have a happy learning!
T. Aki~
Before the winter vacation, school days were the busiest.
>> CORRECT!
Because i had to wake up early everyday. And afterschool, i went to the gym.
>>> Because I had to wake up early every day. And after school, I went to the gym.
I felt everyday was too long.
>>> I felt every day was too long.
But after the winter vacation, friday and weekend is the busiest.
>>> But when the winter vacation has started, Fridays and weekends are the busiest.
Because i go to the part-time job at friday and weekend.
<<< Because I go to my part-time job on Fridays and weekends.
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