Which is your favorite beach?

2020-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. I am having homework now. Nice to meet you. Actually, I haven\'t visited beaches many times. Although I like to travel, I haven\'t experienced many. Boracay was the best sea among I\'ve visited. When I stayed in the Philippines before, I went to the Boracay with my friends. I was really surprised about clean color of the sea. I was fascinated by the color of the sea, so, I took pictures many. Unfortunately, I missed my cellephone, I just have few picture from my friend. I was so sad. I was trying not to regret to miss my cellephones. If I have a chace to go to the Philliphines, I will go to the Boracy. I hope that time I go to there with my family or my boyfriend.

강사 첨삭

Hello!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Hello, teacher.

>> Hello teacher!
I am having homework now.

>> I am doing my homework now.
Nice to meet you.
>> It\'s nice to meet you.
Actually, I haven\'t visited beaches many times.

>> Actually, I haven\'t visited beaches that much.
Although I like to travel, I haven\'t experienced many.

>> Although I like to travel, I don\'t have a lot of experience with visiting beaches.
Boracay was the best sea among I\'ve visited.

>> Boracay was the best beach among the beaches that I\'ve visited.
When I stayed in the Philippines before, I went to the Boracay with my friends.

>> When I stayed in the Philippines before, I went to Boracay with my friends.
I was really surprised about clean color of the sea.

>> I was really surprised with the clean color of the sea.
I was fascinated by the color of the sea, so, I took pictures many.

>> I was fascinated by the color of the sea, so I took many pictures.
Unfortunately, I missed my cellephone, I just have few picture from my friend.

>> Unfortunately, I lost my cellphone so I just have a few pictures from my friend.
I was so sad. I was trying not to regret to miss my cellephones.

>> I was so sad and I was trying not to regret loosing my cellphone.
If I have a chace to go to the Philliphines, I will go to the Boracy. 

>> If I have a chance to go to the Philliphines again, I will go to Boracay. 

I hope that time I go to there with my family or my boyfriend.

>> I hope in that time, I get to go to there with my family or my boyfriend.

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